25 Apr

please read my sci-fi short story and tell me what you think?

Author: admin  /  Category: open office mexico

ok mabey it if a little long…srry
ok mabey it is a little long…srry

wow that was relly good and your brave for putting it online, some @ssholes are gonna make fun of it but i think its so sweet

10 Responses to “please read my sci-fi short story and tell me what you think?”

  1. babiigurl Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 3:39 am

    its really long and good
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  2. ilovegirlpantsonguys Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 4:29 am

    wow that was relly good and your brave for putting it online, some @ssholes are gonna make fun of it but i think its so sweet
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  3. dannie Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 4:51 am

    It was long but it was worth reading. Awesome job!
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  4. Lovepurple Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 5:12 am

    I guess people that like science fiction would like this, but it is not my kind of thing. It is written well though. Good luck with it.
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  5. ks lover Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 5:19 am

    nice but i tought u said SHORT
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  6. basketballplayer Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 6:05 am

    its super long and i couldne finish it. sry
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  7. Gangsta Geek Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 6:26 am

    Logan for academic purposes that was good but other then tht i wouldn't read it. wht is the title by the way?
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  8. RaMOn Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 6:58 am

    it was really good i especially like the part were the dogs attacked.
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    this story

  9. emo:)jack Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 7:10 am

    Ha. It's good. Grammar is off though. Guess that's what happens when it is a rough draft. Stop switching tenses for goodness' sake! : )

    in loving memory of Jack
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  10. logan Says:
    April 26th, 2009 at 7:32 am

    i loved it, great work
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